Sunday, September 28, 2014

6 words, 1 story

Not always alone but always lonely.


She had everything but wanted more.


They knew he'd be eating alone.


Nobody asks what he was wearing.


Not prepared for everything to change.


Nails bitten, speech given, still shaking.


4 comments:

  1. Hey Iris, these are wonderful stories. My personal favorites were the first and fifth ones since they created a lot of opportunities to rise from it. I also like the fact that not every story had the same structure.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your stories.They all tell something different. Out of all your stories my favorite one was the fifth one because I can relate to it.

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  3. I liked how poetic some of your stories sounded and they were varied in subject so it was kept interesting

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  4. I loved your stories :) I'd have to say that the fifth one was my favorite because it was the most relatable (well for me at least). I absolutely hate change and it kind of reminds me about how I used to even sometimes limit my opportunities in order to avoid even the smallest changes taking place.

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